An example of a place that was once unfamiliar to me, but is now a part of my daily life is the Pacific American School. When I first came to this school, I thought it was kind of like a prison, with all the walls made out of concrete and everything. Also, I thought all the students here would be stereotypical Asians, and that I would not get along with any of them, and I would just rot here. Because I was disappointed that I had to leave my old friends, my first impression of this new school was that it was crap, and I would never come to enjoy going here. However, now that I have become more used to the school, and gotten to know the people here, I have realized it is actually a pretty good school, and the people here are really nice and fun to be with. It isn’t really much different from my old school after all. Even though I still miss my old friends, I don’t feel as miserable here anymore.
Steven:
ReplyDeleteAgain, this post is too short. There is a good start here, but you could easily have written another 25 words on this topic. You need 200 words to get full credit.
-M. McCool